People seem to like this kinda descriptive writing where a lot is said but little is acted upon. I tend to like the wife beating the crap out of the husband. There is a certain panache in fast fun action that carries an unexpected love story. I'm a sap for love stories. But still you're ability to put words together this well still surprises me. Well done. Well done indeed! ❤️
People seem to like this kinda descriptive writing where a lot is said but little is acted upon. I tend to like the wife beating the crap out of the husband. There is a certain panache in fast fun action that carries an unexpected love story. I'm a sap for love stories. But still you're ability to put words together this well still surprises me. Well done. Well done indeed! ❤️
Yeah, I was going for a slower paced, dialogue driven scene this time, I'm glad you noticed! Thank you as always ❤️
Wait, why are they “fast” friends?
Also, it seems like a scene like this is rarely written in first person, or is that just my limited experience rearing its head?
Fast friends is a phrase often used to describe a great friendship. In this case, fast is not used as in "quick", but "secure".
To answer your second question, I think most stories in general are not told from a first person perspective!
Quit pulling our chain. You’ve been writing these for years and spending hours a day on each. 😁
Haha, thanks for the compliment!